Thursday, October 30, 2008

fix it

fix the house
look around
there’s more to do
when you have it tight
you’re thinking what’s next

buy another house
you’ll fix that too
they fix everything but the great pyramid
probably fix that too, She said,
they just don’t tell anybody

5 comments:

Tumblewords: said...

fixing it would be a good thing!

Anonymous said...

I saw you at Holly's site and just wanted to pop in to say hello. Holly's a friend and a wonderful poet, so I was naturally curious.

Great poem! I also love the structure and the voice. I look forward to snooping around your site some more. I promise not to break anything, though.

Stan Ski said...

We need the permanent fix rather than the usual quick fix.

jack sender said...

Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment.
Oh, and if they really fixed the pyramid
do you think it would fly?

anthonynorth said...

I think we have too many fixers who just give the impression of fixing things.