Wednesday, October 10, 2012

coping


as the small bangladeshi and tall senegali
simultaneously squeeze departed
i tapped a shoulder; she half-nodded,
and took the inside window seat.

packed we were in fine october rush morning,
rolling slowly in traffic congestion
amid calm low voices and little movement
the girl, now seated next to me in the final row,

wearing an elaborate blue with white
lightening designs on a headset,
privatized from the throng;
when further, from the depths of her large purse

deftly extracted a tiny round compact,
opened it
and peering into the mirror
on the pretense of inspecting her eye,

i in a glance observed
as she melt-glided
swift deep away beyond time borders
into private mirage eternity.


1 comment:

Annie said...

I thought about your poem throughout the day I first read it, and I've been back to read it several times. I love your use of the word, privatized, as a verb, and the girl, melt-gliding swift deep away beyond time borders into private mirage eternity. The images of the two departing and the other worldliness of the girl, yet the concrete reality of her, because she is seen and noticed by the speaker of the poem, is haunting.