Tuesday, June 11, 2019

June sun


outside the country store few sounds this morning,  a car, a shopper, distant birds, chickens. the slight metal rattle when a guy goes by on his bicycle, he smiles and waves as he passes. not much else going on; good June sun heating still air, been enough rain lately, fields are green. smells of summer all over.


the above is modern formatting, below my traditional beat poetry method. am i going into a period of change.  i'm not sure if that is a question.

outside the country store
few sounds this morning,
a car, a shopper,
distant birds, chickens.
the slight metal rattle when 
a guy goes by on his bicycle, 
he smiles and waves as he passes.
not much else going on;
good June sun heating still air,
been enough rain lately, fields are green,
smells of summer all over. 

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