Friday, October 03, 2008

diamonds in her hair

one at a time,
each step she takes,
diamonds in her hair
there ought’a be

her gracious swings
for all the would-be kings,
moon light talkers on the sideline
you know there’d be

it’s sweet beings like her
that comfort dreams
for many men like me, every time
or so it seems

delicious lips
unveiled in smiles
somewhere
I want to be

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

A must beautiful visual poetry I like it very very much.

S.L. Corsua said...

Lyrical. It flows like a song by a suitor. ;) My first time here; been reading past poems. I've enjoyed every piece, with the following as favorites: "Village Evening Report" (enjoyed the many details making the backdrop so vivid), "Modern Times" and "Military Scientists" (both with fresh humor that made me chuckle), "Piano Heartbreak" and "On the Tracks" (both moving narrative poems). Cheers.

Mongoose said...

Oh, I like this one.

jack sender said...

hey, mon-g.
for not liking poetry
you have good taste