Thursday, April 16, 2009

jungle fish

you and i
haven’t seen it all
don’t say you have
don’t think about it
no need to

not all the world caresses
some hurts
and dumps upon us
in papers and magazines
the news of course, they call it that
the video, the Internet that brings pieces
bam banging slapping sounds
pumping games flashing colors into children's heads
Marshall McLuhan was right the medium is the message
now i add, TV did more to destroy the world than educate
I have seen Guatemalan jungle natives in see-through straw huts
watching far away New York soap operas
on TV powered by a noisy gas generator
the soap opera had NYC folk
in nice clothes and makeup
drinks in hand and the natives,
ready to throw a spear through a monkey,
were sitting women breast naked in
a rag covering their crotches
and I’m walking by their hut and
can look right through it
and see them sitting glazed over stuck to the screen.
maybe they flashed me the peace sign
and maybe I gave them the finger
cause they were screwed

media chunks show how people dress and hold their heads
how they clothe their pet animals
while city buses so full
those at the door exit to let others on
dead fish are laid to rest in tins and wait consumption this way

passing by are the rich and famous in their rings and finery
with guards tagging alongside
lest reality get too close
best they remain cushioned
aloof from commoners and dirt poor

on the street notices are
handed by strangers to strangers
pasted across shop windows
stuffed in trash cans or
dropped they litter the streets
are stepped upon, pushed along
where the head count clashes with
the clean, pressed white shirts and latest ties
and we, hats on backwards
in over sized sacky things to cover how fat we are
that resemble sports team garments,
wrinkled sweat stained bags with a bright bold number on it
the number of a hero on the squad
named for a predatory animal
as a sweaty tourist screams at the counter waitress
give me a coke before I die

and I see them sun glassed now
all the while quick stepping alone
bumping into each other
unaware, as if stoned
talking on cell phones
while the senseless talk to themselves
and need no phone
who is changing the world?

for all the while
the sun goes up
the sun goes down

5 comments:

TomC said...

Thank you Jack.

jack sender said...

thank you, tom.

it got me going. i had to add a few more lines about the natives.

your direct kind words got me on it again.

Annie said...

Hi Jack,

This poem is reminding me of Allen Ginsberg, who I've never read much of, but a poet friend patterns some of his work after Ginsberg, and this reminds me of work by both Ginsberg and him.

There are numerous great lines in this poem that stand alone, but the energy of the entire poem works best as a whole. Great energy, sound and rhythm, like this:

"...the news of course, they call it that
the video, the Internet that brings pieces
bam banging slapping sounds
pumping games flashing colors into children's heads..."

And of course, there is great emotion conveyed in this poem. Stanza 2 and Stanza 5 are my favorites, and I like the closing stanza, which brings me back to the true reality of life, so the poem is not just a hopeless, angry litany, but a commentary.

jack sender said...

thank you Annie

the beat poets were earthy
i like that
my roots are there
roots are deep

Sweet Talking Guy.. said...

'dead fish are laid to rest in tins' dead good!