I.
sun bright
cold light
quiet Sunday
gentle anticipation in the air
saturates the walking gentry
tasting environs
II.
Monday contending
cool light winter rain
a light charcoal gray street sheen
umbrellas out for an airing
no hurry day people
all walking with care
cobblestones are slippery
Monday, January 04, 2010
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The words in this poem are spare, yet succeed in painting vivid pictures. I like the mix of mood and imagery: "gentle anticipation in the air saturates the walking gentry." Sounds throughout the poem work together well, one example: gentry, slippery...
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