the wellness of being,
goodness in all respects
remains a narrow line
to travel upon
to shift slightly
adjusting temperament
in kindness
and giving
in full field
out in the open, on my honor, 
although it's a mess
we're all doing the best we can
I'm still working on the above.  I read it again this morning and it didn't read well.    It changed, or I changed.  It didn't work.  I changed the title and a few words and then I pushed it out the door anyway.  I guess that's the best I can do today.
Saturday, February 28, 2009
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I hope you post the poem again when you finish it. The concept is definitely worth exploring.
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