Tuesday, May 05, 2009

blog nature

the second nature of the blog
is like that of a marsh mellow
sugar frosted, and plump
lance it on a stick, over an open fire
it’s exciting, it’s fun, it shines,
flashes into flame
burns, sags, dips and crashes
what a finish, what a shame
at Tuesday, May 05, 2009

4 comments:

TomC said...

Yes, but delicious and memorable if you catch it in time!

Tuesday, May 05, 2009 3:53:00 PM
Andy Sewina said...

You know what they say Jack?
They say: Nothing lasts forever!

I like the speed of this poem, it's like a firework!

Tuesday, May 05, 2009 8:22:00 PM
Julie said...

I love it! You have captured the true essence of a blog. I have a friend who is a wonderful poet. She has had a blog for four years, and I was just marveling at how "long" she's been on. Four years seems like a long time in blogland.

Tuesday, May 05, 2009 11:56:00 PM
jack sender said...

thanks to all of you.

and you know i mean it.

more to come.

Thursday, May 07, 2009 1:10:00 PM

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