Though at times it appears that way, this is not a diary, it’s a simple poetry blog (I like simple). Here’s one from Roma.
First, a writers comment: You know, when I read my stuff, I want it to run right along. If it meanders a bit for a reason, that's okay too.
our way
down our street
not even a street
a cobblestone alley
way – call it a way
down our way thirty seconds
we’re into the nearly on the corner bar Juliano’s
jeeze he has a happy face when we come in
thirty-something, thin and fit, always in a t-shirt
he and his charming wife run the place
we took position
on the tall wooden backless bar stools
not cozy, but we weren’t moving in
we came for a couple of quick glasses of wine
well, not quick
glasses of wine in Roma aren’t quick
not now, nor have they ever been
Juliano always recommends an
Italian red something we never heard of
and we partook
under soft amber light, sipped in slow time
mulling the day, how it played
no crowd as yet, nearly dinner hour
hardly a sound
we looked around, noted every thing
including paintings on the wall
oh boy, not much there
and no rush for us
we ordered a second glass
would you like to try something different?
no, grazie, the same
and thusly an hour slid along the bar
dropped on the floor
skid out the door, it did
thusly time went by the wayside
and we followed it home
I do tell, it was swell
Saturday, May 16, 2009
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I've read through the poem several times to catch the rhythm, the "voice" of the poem, and I enjoy it. Thank you for a pleasant experience!
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