Sunday, February 07, 2010

heard a sound

heard a sound
in bed
going round
in my head

thought
it odd
i said
and thought it out

‘til it was gone
turns out
i was right
it was odd
at Sunday, February 07, 2010

2 comments:

davidrheins said...

write down your mind sounds. strong imagery makes good poetry

Sunday, February 07, 2010 2:36:00 PM
Where are my blogs? said...

ha! that was funny. my dreams often contain sounds, sometimes real, sometimes not. there was this one time an ocean shell was singing. or was it a rock that was shrieking. can't remember. i could hear it above the crash and bang of the lovely waves on my day off at the beach... turned out to be my alarm clock.

Monday, February 08, 2010 6:28:00 PM

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