Tuesday, March 27, 2012

head's not empty

head’s not empty when
i lay there coated in dream dust
no sir, not a bit, you see
begins sometime after three

but im asleep so that’s a guess,
filled with visions more or less
bubbling walking, topped off
great adventure motion coastin’

the best, all rolling long, along
spinning, bubbling on and on, apply the brake;
smelling color, cooked well, dandy and polite enough,
good-time fancy dreaming 'til dawn occurs and i awake.

2 comments:

Annie said...

"smelling color, cooked well, dandy and polite enough..." Your dreams sound enjoyable and worthwhile! "great adventure motion coastin'"

I like how the language and the rhythm of this poem matches the sketchy quality of dreaming- slow and moving, all at the same time.

Marja said...

Your dream dust has created a wonderful poem Keep dreaming