Tuesday, March 03, 2009

D.S. Al Fine

large and growing
the net brings change,
knowledge disseminates
for the world that will be




it is not important
flowers know
it is the sun
they wait for

3 comments:

Annie said...

I like this. I have a novel-in-progress that, in part, addresses the conflict between technology and nature. This poem provides a meaningful, concise contrast.

jack sender said...

Thank you, Annie. I wrote the second part first and liked it a lot.
It seemed so much a brief metaphysical statement that I was compelled to write the first part to counter and to balance it.

I left the large space between the two to indicate distance from one to the other.

Anonymous said...

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video to make your point. You obviously know what youre talking about, why throw away your intelligence on just
posting videos to your blog when you could be giving us something enlightening to read?



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