Tuesday, May 19, 2009

cheese in china

last week M said
she wanted to go to china alone
a couple of months in the outback
or whatever it’s called
away from the cities

without a tour
to see the village folk
what they do
how they dress, what they’re eating
so many of them in so much country

and when M’s sister calls to speak with her
i’ll say she’s in China
and her sister will ask,
“...What about cheese
in China?”

2 comments:

gerry boyd said...

spot on. deceptively simple and ultimately clever as a character vignette. gave me a hearty laugh, hope that was your intent....

jack sender said...

laugh? what do you mean you laughed? like, out loud? (do you like the "like"? i am learning to like use it.)

okay, then laughing is good.
for like every one.

by the way, there is nothing deceptive about my simple. i do simple.

blog on, mate. I'll be like watching.