Wednesday, November 25, 2009

the field of flowers

Campo dei Fiori means field of flowers
that was yesterdays vision of the area
today in 2009 i had to stop and look both ways
to cross through the center of the field of flowers

i wore my heavy jacket
others had on t-shirts
from our third floor dungeon window
i have to lean far out only to see the sky

the market is jumping in full flavor and scents
traffic, food stalls, fruits and vegetables, pots and pans
musicians, tourists, workers and locals of every venue
and yes, three stands that sell flowers

living nearby i woke out of dream to a persistent car alarm
and thought of the keystone cops in silent movies
running, clamoring, bumping into each other in comic confusion
in silent films the words flash on the screen. this says - alarm

only no one ran today, nothing unusual happened
no one laughed
for an hour the persistent, clear-voiced, changing squeal sang,
echoed along stone buildings and cobblestone streets

i awoke after twelve hours sleep
now a week has passed since i flew here
groggy yet, my body’s clock
is wound but not set

the cannon on the hill fired the noon shot as i left our apartment
to rid myself of the alarm
better to enter the field of flowers
and look both ways

2 comments:

Julie said...

This is absolutely beautiful, Jack. I'll try not to gush too much. But I love so much about it--the flow and rhythm of the voice and line, the images, and what it says. I love the descriptions in stanza three, and the market jumping in "full flavor and scents," etc. I'm living the experience through your words.

Having to look both ways to see the field of flowers is right on. What a shame we have to do that so much these days, but it's very true. The cannon shot is a great parallel with the alarm clock.

Sorry for the analysis. I get excited when I see a poem that is in full flavor. Beautiful work!

Annie said...

I have to echo what Julie says, she's said it so beautifully. You bring this world to life!