across the street
workers were taking down letters
of the store name -  Rinascimento
large metal  script going one at a time
right into the trash
the name of the store could be read
on the unpainted wall 
where for years the letters had hung 
only  O remained, 
i was thinking
how i could use it
before it went  down the drain into history forever
on my way into a nearby  building, 
a guy by the door was playing a violin so badly
he should offer  people  coins from his cup
for the aggravation he caused all too eagerly
i barely squeezed into the elevator  
as the door closed it took off shaking chains,
one of those old rattling jobs 
that sounded like Jacob Marley’s ghost
the little barred box we were  in
was a  packed rocket ascending,
as i noticed over the elevator door
900 kg  12 persons,  a warning 
i saw it too late for us,
we were locked down in a cage of the type 
used to load wild animals 
aboard a ship in Borneo in ancient times
there were too many  in here,
couldn’t count them all,
that large one counts for two
had to start over three times
carry the four, 900 kilos divided into 12 people 
is how much?  nine into 12, 
two zeros left
I’ll use them later, 
reminded me of the letter O
i left behind, 
must  do the math  quickly
or ring the bell and run
it’s about an eight floor building
high enough if it goes down fast,
i suppose there is a basement,
count that as another floor to drop
i broke out in a sweat
as the box quit shaking
and hung there
having arrived at some floor
didn’t matter where,
the door opened everyone  bailed,
headed for the stair
before we  all got impaled
Monday, April 12, 2010
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2 comments:
For some reason, I love this! Even though it's organized, it reminds me of "stream of consciousness." It rambles, but it's all interrelated. ~Annie
yes, some of the flow is like stream of c,
yet, nearly all stanzas stand independently.
the name of it, the scene, i like it all too.
i tell ya, Annie, i do plum like to ramble.
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