ask around a while, you'll see,
not completely, but often;
June slides in as the favorite.
i'm thinking good weather
after the months waiting to get here.
relax in that chair, the one you know and love.
coffee is ready, or take the tea.
sugar or no, as you prefer.
that's clouds rolling in.
and your father,
talking water here, i like water...
a dip in the pool, some rain or the
ocean,
float along. find the melody,
make a song of it.
soft and yeah, a song you feel.
words you need, when you desire.
soft and yeah.
from the heart.
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You could peek at Yahoo's home page and note how they create
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I was wondering if you ever thought of changing the page layout of your site?
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But maybe you could a little more in the way of content so people could connect with it better.
Youve got an awful lot of text for only having one
or 2 images. Maybe you could space it out better?
do these Anonymous write their comments
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