what you expect when
you look up.
to home of the big
shiny
in what is otherwise dark,
nearly black, but
yeah
there’s color and i’m an artist, even we,
including Michelangelo Buonarroti who didn’t pump
red like blood under the sculpted fine Tuscan
Carrara marble skin of
the Pieta -
the Madonna and dead
Christ,
have a tendency to round things off.
like i‘s saying, it was dark,
the pale moon bright
near white
or there abouts.
and low you have it
creeped down on the side is the face
as drawn in olden times, in antique mysterious hue
as per the season, moisture content in the air,
time of night, cloud drift in the way, all of the above
come together, perfect, scary and complete;
needed only dreadful music, wind blowing
and black cat
leaping, shrieking, but this is life
not hollywood remembers, not even a mouse
so, that’s how it goes
and went leaving
an impression on my mind;
like an inside job wall brain stencil.
3 comments:
Hi Jack,
I've read several times, and I love the digression that all fits. When I saw your post title, I wondered if your poem would be about Neil Armstrong. I enjoy the whole poem, but this is one of the lines that stood out for me: "in antique mysterious hue as per the season," and how it works along with the rhythm of the whole poem and the "voice" of the speaker.
Three cheers for the big shiny in what is otherwise dark! (and the wall brain stencil, too).
Really enjoyed this.
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