Wednesday, August 29, 2012

the man in the moon




what you expect when you look up.
to home of the big shiny
in what is otherwise dark,
nearly black, but yeah

there’s color and i’m an artist, even we,
including Michelangelo Buonarroti who didn’t pump
red like blood under the sculpted fine Tuscan
Carrara marble  skin of the Pieta -
the  Madonna and dead Christ,  
have a tendency to round things off.

like i‘s saying, it was dark,
the pale  moon bright near white
or there abouts.
and low you have it

creeped down on the side is the face
as drawn in olden times, in antique mysterious hue 
as per the season, moisture content in the air,
time of night, cloud drift in the way, all of the above

come together, perfect, scary and complete;
needed only dreadful music, wind blowing
and black cat leaping, shrieking, but this is life
not hollywood remembers, not even a mouse

so, that’s how it goes
and went leaving
an impression on my mind;  
like an inside job wall brain stencil.







3 comments:

Annie said...

Hi Jack,

I've read several times, and I love the digression that all fits. When I saw your post title, I wondered if your poem would be about Neil Armstrong. I enjoy the whole poem, but this is one of the lines that stood out for me: "in antique mysterious hue as per the season," and how it works along with the rhythm of the whole poem and the "voice" of the speaker.

Hannah Stephenson said...

Three cheers for the big shiny in what is otherwise dark! (and the wall brain stencil, too).

Really enjoyed this.

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