Saturday, May 11, 2019

ode for deer

near the quiet town, New Haven,
three deer, to one side,
off the road
in tall grass, pause.
calmly look our way.
preeminent creatures.
standing without movement,
their beauty
took my breath away.

at Saturday, May 11, 2019

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Annie said...

I enjoyed this poem, and it brings me the living memory of deer, standing still, just watching, while I hold my breath... The final line, to me, would read best, with the rhythm and imagery of the rest of the poem - a simple rearrangement - to read: "their beauty took away my breath."

Saturday, May 18, 2019 3:09:00 PM
Annie said...

or, "their beauty took my breath."

Saturday, May 18, 2019 8:33:00 PM

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